Here we go. I also have detailed judge comments on the 5 entries that were culled. I’ll post later this week if there are no objections. She made some really sound points.
So you have until midnight New Year’s Eve to post your next line.
Ladies and gents, Have a Very Merry Christmas and Most Joyous New Year!
1. I stared at the nine men of my supposed dreams. Of my nightmares, more like, and theirs too judging by their stunned expressions as they stared back at me.
The show’s host said, “What’s wrong, Princess?”, the overdone innocence in his… Read more »
The embers glowed softly, and in their dim light,
I gazed round the room and I cherished the sight.
My wife was asleep, her head on my chest,
My daughter beside me, angelic in rest.
Outside the snow fell, a blanket of white,
Transforming the yard to a winter delight.
The sparkling lights in the tree I believe,
Completed the magic that was Christmas Eve.
My eyelids were heavy, my breathing was deep,
Secure and surrounded by love I would sleep.
In perfect contentment, or so it would seem,
So I slumbered, perhaps I started to dream.
The sound wasn’t… Read more »
Wow, we’re coming down the stretch ladies, and I’m really excited for you all. I must apologize for my absence in commenting and not posting more in between rounds. Plain and simple, I have been slammed.
I am completely rewriting MASTER OF SURRENDER, and while it was daunting in the beginning, I have my editor to thank for making this the best work I have written to date. I love this story. I love the characters, and I love my Blood Sword Knights.
While I will be posting the next round Monday the 24th, I’m taking the week of Christmas… Read more »
1. It was right around 10 p.m. that I realized merry widows were made to be ripped off right away, not to be worn for an all-night TV marathon.
When I’d first put on the incredibly revealing costume — come-fuck-me red lace, satin garters complete with bows, and enough bone and underwire to heft my generous Ds to unbelievable heights — I was thinking about looking hot, not the practicalities of actually wearing it. But I needed to pull out all the stops, so here I was, all dolled up and ready for a little action.
Only, after lying in… Read more »