Karin Tabke | Author of Contemporary, Historical, and Paranormal Romance: Author of Sensual Romance
Karin Tabke | Author of Contemporary, Historical, and Paranormal Romance: Author of Sensual Romance


Round nine is up!!!
March 12th, 2007

Here we go!

1. He’d introduced her to passion in payment for his life. And yet, the woman who would be Captain André Marin’s salvation had closed her mind against him, locking him out of her dreams. A waning moon crawled across a starless sky over the bow of the Trident, the French merchant vessel under his command. He closed his eyes and reached for her with his thoughts, “Caitrina, open to my touch.”
A nothingness as deep as the ocean was his only response.
He glanced down from his perch on the quarterdeck to meet the worried gazes of his crew. Time was the one thing they had too much of, but could not afford to waste.
Trapped aboard his cursed vessel, he was the same man who’d set sail two centuries before, but once his feet left the deck, he was no different than the ghosts guarding the castle walls along the Scottish coast—cursed and alone.
2. Elizabeth squeezed her eyes tight and turned her face away from the wicked-looking blade. She’d seen what it could do. Knew first hand the destruction it could bring.
The death.
“Please,” she whispered, a tear slipping down her cheek. “I…I can’t do this.”
Cold steel grazed the skin exposed by her low bodice and she flinched. Her tormentor shifted closer in the confined carriage.
3. Jordan Blake always figured he’d go to hell someday, but he never expected it to be this soon. His first clue was a no-brainer, the sign posted outside the town limits read: Hades, Colorado, population two hundred and six.
He almost hit the second clue as he wheeled his Lexus onto Main Street and immediately swerved to avoid the horse tied to the hitching rail. Swearing under his breath, he parked across the street, then jerked on the rearview mirror to make sure he hadn’t been seeing things. Yeah, there was a horse tied to a hitching rail, all right.
He stepped out of his car and looked up and down the street, squinting against the fine mist that dampened his face. Not much to look at—a barber shop, some tiny crafty-looking store, a gas station/mini-mart/Laundromat, an old stone church, three houses, and a flat-faced building with a faded *Oleson’s Mercantile and Coffee* sign above the door. Between the name and the horse, he felt like he’d been transported onto the set of *Little House on the Prairie.*
4. Jack Sutton heard a whisper of movement a split second before an arm wrapped around his neck and something sharp plunged into his gut. The shocking reality that he’d just been stabbed registered as he was shoved to the cold, grease-stained concrete floor, his entire midsection on fire. Instinct forced him to his hands and knees before a hard shove sent him crashing back to the floor.
“You should’ve slit his throat,” a croaky, unfamiliar voice complained.
“He’ll be dead in an hour,” a second voice assured the first. “Come on, let’s get the cash register opened—if this don’t look like a robbery, we don’t get paid.”
Jack lay still as death, praying whoever these bastards were they’d hurry the hell up. If he could crawl to the phone and dial 9-1-1, he might have a chance.
5. “Just keep on driving, Mister,” Moxie said as she struggled to keep the gun in her hand from shaking as she aimed it at the man’s head.
He turned to look down the barrel of the gun, his eyes then trailing up her arm to look into her face. She tried to put on a hard, outlawish-looking expression, but it wasn’t working—it’s hard to look evil when you’ve got curly red hair and freckles.
“You’re joking, right?” He gave her a hopeful little smile, while his eye cut over to the gun pointed at his chin.
“Nope, dead serious. Drive on out of here and nobody gets hurt.” She gestured with the gun toward the driveway leading out of the sun baked hotel parking lot.
6. “Damn, it’s hotter than the devil’s backyard out here.” Castana Castillo took her hands from the steering wheel just long enough to swipe at the river of sweat running down the nape of her neck and to adjust the volume on George Strait’s
“Amarillo by Morning”. The truck and two-horse trailer swerved, and she quickly regained control of the rig, but not before something bounced off the right front fender with a sickening thud.
Oh, no, what now?
Braking as hard as she dared, Castana lurched to a stop, half fell out of the pickup and stumbled back to see what –or who– she’d struck. She stared in disbelief at the crumpled body beside the road. “Oh, God, please don’t be dead,” she prayed, falling to her knees beside a bloodied man who stared unblinking at the Arizona sky.
“I’m alive,” he groaned.
7. Fighting the natural urge to fade away, disappear, and remain in reclusion, Lelandi Wildhaven spied the seedy tavern down the street where she would set up her first night of surveillance.
Why had her sister ended up dead—here, of all the godforsaken places in the States? A pang of anger and regret scraped Lelandi’s insides like a ragged knife. Keep a cool head, she reminded herself; she was in *their* territory now.
Sugar-drained leaves colored in ripe purples, reds, oranges, and yellows danced in the breeze while a haunting sound wound through the Colorado town and mountains like a warning. Determined not to back out now, Lelandi ignored her gut instinct telling her this was a bad idea and pushed open the tavern’s heavy oak door, the rusted hinges squealing, jarring her taut nerves.
Several bearded men and the bartender turned to stare at her and at once she feared the worst—they saw straight through her disguise.
Spying unoccupied tables at the opposite end of the tavern, dark, perfect for her needs, Lelandi headed for the most obscure one, but her skin prickled with unease when the place remained deathly quiet.
8. Joshua shuddered as the massive red door creaked open, allowing the stench of brimstone to steal into the room. Soon he would have to pass through that horrifying door–unless he could come up with some way to evade his fate.
He strode over to the Waiting Room clerk, a fat man whose inadequate wings fluttered anxiously as Joshua banged his fist on the desk. “Pray tell me, am I destined to go through that infernal door, or is there a path to redemption?”
“Geez, Doc, it’s kinda late to be thinking about redeeming yourself.” Eyeing him curiously, the clerk added, “Usually you gotta commit one of the three biggies to get the red-door treatment–rape, murder, or egregious pollution of natural resources–so what’d you do?”
“‘Twas closest to murder,” Joshua said, shame and regret searing him as he considered his wasted life, his great failure, his final disgrace. And yet he’d signed up as a surgeon in the Continental Army with the sole intention of helping his fellow man—including his courageous but reckless younger brother.
9. Death comes to all of us in many ways. It doesn’t consider how it leaves us to the mercy of others who must view our remains.
This time, death had come suddenly and without warning. The young man had been in his prime and died with a look of surprise on his face. There were still poker chips and cards set out for two other players on his table; beer bottles and ash trays covered the scarred laminate, and a bowl of potato chips were left uneaten.
He sat in his chair with a .22 slug in his forehead, with plenty of gunshot residue stippled around the wound to show that the killer had walked right up to him and shot him. Blood had trailed down his face from the gaping hole in his forehead. He’d dropped his beer bottle on the floor and its golden liquid had pooled by his feet.
10. “I can make a woman come using just my mouth.”
George Beringer squinted through an alcoholic haze at his friend Damian Hunt, Viscount Atherton, trying to figure out exactly what Damian meant by that remark. They were both much too drunk, but then, what else was there to do on a cold winter’s night tucked away here at the Atherton estate, except discuss horses and politics, and now, obviously, sex?
“What’s so impressive about that — I’ve never met a woman yet who could resist a man’s mouth on her private lips,” George declared.
“Oh, but I’m not talking about using my mouth on her,” Damian said with a slow smile, “I’m talking about making her come using just the power of my words.”
“Balderdash,” George cried, nearly dropping his wineglass, “you may have a well-deserved reputation as a ladies’ man, you scoundrel, but it’s impossible to make a woman climax using just words.”
“Care to place a small wager on that?” Damian challenged, quirking an eyebrow.
Next to sex, gambling was George’s favorite activity — the night had suddenly gotten much more interesting.
11. The man lay face-up in a pool of his own blood. Kyra Walsh recoiled but not in terror, she’d seen dead bodies before. In her other life, not here.
Recognition flashed – even in death the curly, black hair now tinged by a dull, reddish-brown, the bushy uni-brow, and the pointy nose all combined to give Larry Jones a look of cruelty. What had the bastard been up to at her construction site?
Her heart jerked like the rev of a jackhammer. Here’s one problem the Big Brothers/Big Sisters program sure doesn’t cover with mentors–how to tell your “little sister” her uncle is dead in ten easy steps. Poor Lani, between her mother’s emotional abandonment and her cousins’ harassment, how much could one kid take?
12. “Damn loser recruit,” Captain Connors muttered as he sweltered in the alleyway, forced to endure the scents of week-old Chow Mein coming from the Dumpster he leaned against.
A mingle of sweet citrus and coconut strong enough to turn his stomach overpowered even the stench of the restaurant refuse surrounding him as the hairs rose on his arms. It was one of them, had to be, only shape-shifters gave off that cloying scent a recruiter could catch a whiff of a hundred yards away. He inhaled the rancid fumes rising from the pavement to clear the shifter smell from his nostrils.
Connors stayed leaning, body tense, as a gorgeous blonde strolled into the cramped, trash-filled alley like it was a neighborhood park at lunchtime. Shifter females were breath-taking, making you want, until you remembered what they were and worried about going to bed with Sue Ann and waking up with Jim Bob. He pushed out from the metal at his back, spit on the ground, and thought for the umpteenth time, God, he hated when they were female.
He inhaled deeply of her Shifter scent, verifying she was what she appeared to be, and said, “Michael or Michelle?”
13. “Your sorry ass is going to be even sorrier, Jimmy Ray!”
The bat connected with a sickening, satisfying crunch. Jimmy Ray’s pained, horrified expression should have sent a spurt of triumph through Angel, but it didn’t.
“You crazy bitch!”
She tightened her grip on the scarred Louisville Slugger. She had a choice – take another swing at her ex’s ego by hitting him where it would hurt him most or walk away before the cops showed up and she lost what little hard-won dignity she had left.
Too late.
Blue lights flaring in lazy swirls, a Chandler County sheriff’s car pulled into the parking lot.
14. Through the darkness the child ran, dogging the woman’s heels. Short, angular legs that had never seen an ounce of baby fat, churned through the sweating foliage. The damp heat tightened, stealing her breath as the tropical jungle closed around her.
“Mama,” the child whispered and the faint sound of her own voice was comforting when everything around her breathed death. She reached for the hand her mother offered, holding with desperate strength to the only person who might save her from the evil lurking in the shrouded Cambodian night.
A monkey screeched, twigs snapped and only her mother’s grip kept her from bolting off the path as what sounded like footsteps ranged through the jungle.
“It is not the Khmer Rouge, little one,” her mother soothed in careful French, the language their captors didn’t understand.
The child bit her lip, the sharp pain making her forget the ache in her side but not what roamed in the dark shadows.
15. Across the crowded ferry, the little girl looked up and Gabe Moreau ducked his head, praying she’d sit tight and stay the hell away. Blunt fingernails trenched into sweat slicked palms and a phantom tingle in his right palm itched to feel the reassuring weight of his standard issue Glock.
But the Glock was gone.
Along with his badge.
Above him, a green awning blocked the bright July sun, a wayward corner flapping with the ocean’s stiff breeze, but neither noise nor movement distracted his traitorous mind from the waif of a girl or her piercing gaze.
A gaze that left him paralyzed, as if the meanest SOB he’d ever hauled downtown had a boot planted across his throat and the cold blue steel of a barrel pressed against his teeth.
Unbelievable. He’d been rendered useless by the unassuming glance of a mere child.
16. She’d become nothing more than a common thief.
No, not common – nothing about Egyptologist Katherine Meyer could ever be construed as common, especially when she was legally dead.
Kat checked her reflection in the bathroom mirror one last time, took a deep breath to settle the nerves in her stomach and told herself she looked pretty good for a seven-year-old corpse. The black slacks and matching jacket were perfect, nothing fancy, not one thing about them the slightest bit memorable. No one glancing her direction tonight would ever see anything other than the professional assistant she resembled, and that was precisely the way she wanted it. The less attention she drew, the safer she’d be, because being here wasn’t a choice, it was a matter of life and death.
Her stomach rolled as she turned down the long hallway, as her sensible flats clicked along the cement floor. Muffled music from the party out front drifted to her ears; ahead, a security guard looked up from his post at the end of the corridor and gave her the once-over.
17. “Some wild animal is going to eat you alive!”
The voice coming through the cell phone had Kia rolling her eyes, as she turned her car off the main road and through the narrow band of dark woods leading to her new home. The gorgeous, one-hundred year old, two-story house came into view, and she gasped, “Oh my God!”
“It *is* a wild animal, isn’t it? I knew it!” her sister’s voice got higher pitched with each word.
“Chill, Sydney. The only animal out here is Dracula,” Kia said, closing the phone over her sister’s protests.
The cell rang again almost immediately, but Kia ignored it as she slid out of her Jeep and motioned for the huge black Labrador to follow her. Her heart kicked into a higher gear as she stood staring at her very own piece of history.
For a moment, she was sure she saw a woman’s face in one of the second floor windows.
18. “Son, you’ve got more metal in you than the Terminator.”
Immobile in a hospital bed with one leg in traction, one arm fractured, and bruises painted on his body like modern art on a canvas, Garrett McCloud found no humor in his doctor’s joke.
Refraining from comment, he watched Dr. Shaw flip open the chart and wrinkle his lips while he studied whatever mysterious gibberish doctors wrote on the things. With his frizzy white hair, the good doctor remarkably resembled Einstein, and Garrett considered him as much a genius as the great scientist, in spite of the quirky, misplaced wit.
Looking up, Dr. Shaw examined Garrett’s face and must have realized his joke flopped because he said, “Here’s the deal, Mr. McCloud, if you keep crashing, I don’t know if we can keep putting you together–even now, I can’t guarantee you’re not going to have a limp.”
When he added, “Your knee resembled Humpty Dumpty after his great fall,” Garrett decided the doctor spent too much time with his grandkids.
“I’m positive I’m paying a fortune for you and all the king’s men to patch me together again,” he growled.
“You are,” the doctor agreed, scribbling notes on the chart before zeroing his gaze on Garrett and saying, “But my point is, racing motorcycles is a young man’s sport–it’s time for you to think about another career.”
19. “Maybe I should become a lesbian for a week,” I blurted.
Carol choked on what was left of her watered down frozen strawberry daiquiri.
I intended to pat her back, but she had become a blur – three too many daiquiris for me – so even the beige walls of my den seemed to move.
“Where the hell did that come from?” Carol asked, staring at me as if I’d grown two heads.
I gulped the rest of my drink and said in a voice I knew sounded like a whine, “Don’t
know what else to do.”
“Spill, right now, Margo,” Carol ordered as she banged her glass on the magazine-covered, white coffee table.
I hiccuped, then answered, “Jay’s coming back to town.”
I scratched my head, but could barely feel it.
20. Who said dying was easy?
Ruby May stepped out the front door of the Delta Funeral Home in what had been her good luck dress–until they buried her in it. She studied her reflection in passing, and realized dying in Delta had a downside; she was a Blue Light Special on heels.
The town slowly receded as Ruby walked the winding Tennessee roads, reliving life moments all strung together like glass beads. Life didn’t come with a damn rulebook–a good thing since ignoring advice had been her personal mantra. She had led an amoral life, impossible to sugarcoat, and there was a high probability her view would be outside those pearly gates her mama talked about.
In the distance, the old homestead sprawled across Cooper Mountain and Ruby ran to it, like a child bolting into a mama’s arms. The heart of the place welcomed her, surprising since she had high-tailed it out of town at the first bump in the road.
21. Like a snake, coiled and ready to strike, it’d been waiting for him when he’d arrived at work. And as it had when he’d first read it, his stomach knotted and cold fear wrapped around him.
He’d stared at the words, reading them but not processing them.
No, that was a damn lie–he’d processed them all right, and what his mind told him was inconceivable.
The paper in his hand crinkled and he turned his gaze to it, smoothing the wrinkles out against his thigh and scanning it again even though he’d memorized it days ago.
*Dear Mr. MacMillan*–not Dear Mac or even Mac, hell, it should have said, Dear John because that’s exactly what it was–a Dear John letter.
Mac closed his eyes, the barrier of numbness that had first descended long gone, leaving enough room for the fear and loneliness and grief to sneak in.
She’d left him.
22. As much as he’d hoped Lacey McLaren had gained a hundred pounds and sprouted horns in the five years since he’d last seen her, she hadn’t. Noah cursed, unable to pull his gaze away; if anything, she was more beautiful now than when they’d first met. His heart tripped over itself, his gut twisting into knots as he watched her lead the chestnut mare into the middle of the indoor arena and mount up.
Thank God it was too damn hot for chaps today; the image of her ass framed in tight suede was one he really didn’t need to carry with him. Just the thought sent blood rushing south, causing his jeans to grow tighter around the zipper.
“Does Lacey have a clue that it’s me, specifically, who’s come to look at buying her horses?” he asked, casting his half-brother a sidelong glance.
Colin’s sly grin was all the answer he needed.
“She’s expecting my brother,” he explained calmly, not taking his eyes off the horse and rider,”she just doesn’t know that you’re him.”
23. Kenzie Summers swiveled on the bar stool, her gaze encompassing every inch of the lively room in an attempt to find someone to ruin her reputation.
Every hormone in her body clicked to attention when she saw him, the epitome of pure sin, weaving through the gyrating couples on the dance floor.
“Aren’t you supposed to be at your engagement party, Kenzie?” her friend Nate, the bartender asked.
“Hardly an engagement, more like a life sentence,” Kenzie scowled, her attention momentarily distracted from the handsome stranger who’d taken a seat three barstools down.
The first she’d even known she was engaged was when her father had shown her the announcement he’d put in the paper and since then, she’d fought with him constantly, telling him she had no intention of becoming a perfect Stepford wife to a man she’d never met.
“Right about now, Mr. Jackson Rockingham the Third is realizing that he’s been stood up,” she told Nate as she glanced to her left, suddenly losing herself in the bluest eyes she’d ever seen.
Her pulse leapt at the interest in those eyes and accelerated into overdrive when he slid off the barstool and headed her way.
“Is having the night from hell justification for drowning ones sorrows?” he murmured, his husky voice weaving around Kenzie like a lover’s touch.
24. Lord, that man was gorgeous.
Of course, that was why I was standing in his office on a cold, wet Tuesday morning, dressed only in a form-fitting ruby red dress and matching strappy heels.
I was a little cold, but not enough to make me rethink my wardrobe choice – long legs and perky feet were my only real assets, so I had no choice but to show them. It wasn’t as if I could rely on my *breasts* to carry the outfit – nope, left to their own devices, they’d let the team down every time. So I’d worn a push-up bra to maximise their potential and tried to draw attention in a downward, more beneficial direction.
But this man in front of me – I doubted he had a single body part that wasn’t pulling its weight. I sighed in appreciation and allowed myself a moment to stare at the perfection of form that was Matt Malone.
Then, heavenly moment over, I dragged my focus from Mr Sexalicious back to my whole reason for being there.
25. “Despite what you apparently believe,” Lieutenant Kathryn Glace snapped, the pale skin across her cheeks tightening and tinting peach, “I’ve given this a great deal of thought—the family is legitimate, and their unique. . .talents. . have proven significantly helpful in the past.”
“I know who they are,” Nick said, trying to iron the grit from his voice. He knew what they were too: gypsies, tramps and thieves. Okay, maybe not tramps, but the thievery bit sure as hell fit. The con artist he’d been stuck with on the Riverside kidnapping, had charged the family a bundle for her so called services, only to deliver false hope and additional heartache. Significantly helpful? Hardly.
“This isn’t a request, detective,” the lieutenant said, her blue eyes chilling, “you have no leads, no evidence and no suspects.

Congrats! and Good luck!!!

K*

41 comments to “Round nine is up!!!”

  1. Mary Marvella
    March 12th, 2007 at 3:51 pm · Link

    OMIGOD! OMIGOD! Did you hear me yell! I hate to see any of us dropped from the competition but I think those of us still here ROCK!



  2. Cheryel Hutton
    March 12th, 2007 at 4:11 pm · Link

    Joining Mary’s screaming here. OMG! WOW! I’m shocked, amazed, thrilled. This is so much scary fun!

    Thanks, Karin!!



  3. LaDonna
    March 12th, 2007 at 4:15 pm · Link

    Phew!!! That’s all I can say. Congrats fellow screamers! Karin’s girls are loud and proud. 🙂



  4. Laurie Wood
    March 12th, 2007 at 4:18 pm · Link

    Congratulations on the agent request, LaDonna! And WOW! I’m so happy to still be here I can hardly believe it! Good luck to all!



  5. Laurie Wood
    March 12th, 2007 at 4:25 pm · Link

    Death comes to all of us in many ways. It doesn’t consider how it leaves us to the mercy of others who must view our remains.

    This time, death had come suddenly and without warning. The young man had been in his prime and died with a look of surprise on his face. There were still poker chips and cards set out for two other players on his table; beer bottles and ash trays covered the scarred laminate, and a bowl of potato chips were left uneaten.

    He sat in his chair with a .22 slug in his forehead, with plenty of gunshot residue around the wound to show that the killer had walked right up to him and shot him. Blood had trailed down his face from the gaping hole in his forehead. He’d dropped his beer bottle on the floor and its golden liquid had pooled by his feet.

    The room temperature was about fifty-two degrees.



  6. D'Ann Linscott-Dunham
    March 12th, 2007 at 3:55 pm · Link

    I hear you, Mary! I was screaming so loud, too, I wouldn’t be surprised if every editor in NYC didn’t come see what the fuss is all about!!!
    I’m so thrilled to be here I can’t even voice it.



  7. Amanda
    March 12th, 2007 at 7:00 pm · Link

    “Damn loser recruit,” Captain Connors muttered as he sweltered in the alleyway, forced to endure the scents of week-old Chow Mein coming from the Dumpster he leaned against.

    A mingle of sweet citrus and coconut strong enough to turn his stomach overpowered even the stench of the restaurant refuse surrounding him as the hairs rose on his arms. It was one of them, had to be, only shape-shifters gave off that cloying scent a recruiter could catch a whiff of a hundred yards away. He inhaled the rancid fumes rising from the pavement to clear the shifter smell from his nostrils.

    Connors stayed leaning, body tense, as a gorgeous blonde strolled into the cramped, trash-filled alley like it was a neighborhood park at lunchtime. Shifter females were breath-taking, making you want, until you remembered what they were and worried about going to bed with Sue Ann and waking up with Jim Bob. He pushed out from the metal at his back, spit on the ground, and thought for the umpteenth time, God, he hated when they were female
    .
    He inhaled deeply of her Shifter scent, verifying she was what she appeared to be and said, “Michael or Michelle?”

    She reached up and grasped her breasts in two overflowing handfuls, looking him straight in the eye as she uttered in sultry tones, “It seems it is Michelle today.”

    *********
    OMG, it is nervewracking just to push the submit comment button LOL



  8. Nicole Carter
    March 12th, 2007 at 8:22 pm · Link

    A little down that I didn’t make it, but rock on ladies! Good luck for sure now!

    ** crossed fingers for you all **



  9. Donna Kowalczyk
    March 12th, 2007 at 9:17 pm · Link

    Jack Sutton heard a whisper of movement a split second before an arm wrapped around his neck and something sharp plunged into his gut. The shocking reality that he’d just been stabbed registered as he was shoved to the cold, grease-stained concrete floor, his entire midsection on fire. Instinct forced him to his hands and knees before a hard shove sent him crashing back to the floor.

    “You should’ve slit his throat,” a croaky, unfamiliar voice complained.

    “He’ll be dead in an hour,” a second voice assured the first. “Come on, let’s get the cash register opened””if this don’t look like a robbery, we don’t get paid.”

    Jack lay still as death, praying whoever these bastards were they’d hurry the hell up. If he could crawl to the phone and dial 9-1-1, he might have a chance.

    Jesus, he was going to puke.



  10. Sheila Raye
    March 12th, 2007 at 6:17 pm · Link

    It’s a happy, happy day. Congrats to all of those left standing — and a special woooo-hoooo to Ladonna for that agent request.

    Fingers crossed for everyone for next week!



  11. Sheila Raye
    March 12th, 2007 at 6:19 pm · Link

    He’d introduced her to passion in payment for his life. And yet, the woman who would be Captain André Marin’s salvation had closed her mind against him, locking him out of her dreams. A waning moon crawled across a starless sky over the bow of the Trident, the French merchant vessel under his command. He closed his eyes and reached for her with his thoughts, “Caitrina, open to my touch.”

    A nothingness as deep as the ocean was his only response.

    He glanced down from his perch on the quarterdeck to meet the worried gazes of his crew. Time was the one thing they had too much of, but could not afford to waste.

    Trapped aboard his cursed vessel, he was the same man who’d set sail two centuries before but once his feet left the deck, he was no different than the ghosts guarding the castle walls along the Scottish coast””cursed and alone.

    Yet, in her dreams he’d lived again.



  12. Stacey Netzel
    March 12th, 2007 at 9:25 pm · Link

    Jordan Blake always figured he’d go to hell someday, but he never expected it to be this soon. His first clue was a no-brainer, the sign posted outside the town limits read: Hades, Colorado, population two hundred and six.

    He almost hit the second clue as he wheeled his Lexus onto Main Street and immediately swerved to avoid the horse tied to the hitching rail. Swearing under his breath, he parked across the street, then jerked on the rearview mirror to make sure he hadn’t been seeing things. Yeah, there was a horse tied to a hitching rail, all right.

    He stepped out of his car and looked up and down the street, squinting against the fine mist that dampened his face. Not much to look at””a barber shop, some tiny crafty-looking store, a gas station/mini-mart/Laundromat, an old stone church, three houses, and a flat-faced building with a faded *Oleson’s Mercantile and Coffee* sign above the door. Between the name and the horse, he felt like he’d been transported onto the set of *Little House on the Prairie.*

    Only the jagged peaks of the Rockies veiled by gloomy clouds weren’t no prairie, and the girl walking out of the mercantile with saddlebags slung over her shoulder wasn’t Laura Ingalls; Half-pint didn’t limp.



  13. Stacey Netzel
    March 12th, 2007 at 9:30 pm · Link

    You know, I can’t view your site at work, Karin–something to do with the sexiness of it all–and I’d really love to look at those hot bodies every few minutes or so…anyway, I have to wait for Donna K to let me know, and that is awful (the waiting).

    I swear–someone is going to end up in Springfield, MO instead of Springfield, IL one of these days because I’m preoccupied with the contest! (I’m a corporate travel agent.)

    LaDonna, in case you missed my congrats, here it is again! Best of luck.

    And everyone else–the worst part about this is how great all these beginnings are! Good luck everyone. 🙂



  14. Terry Spear
    March 12th, 2007 at 9:49 pm · Link

    Fighting the natural urge to fade away, disappear, and remain in reclusion, Lelandi Wildhaven spied the seedy tavern down the street where she would set up her first night of surveillance.

    Why had her sister ended up dead””here, of all the godforsaken places in the States? A pang of anger and regret scraped Lelandi’s insides like a ragged knife. Keep a cool head, she reminded herself; she was in *their* territory now.
    Sugar-drained leaves colored in ripe purples, reds, oranges, and yellows danced in the breeze while a haunting sound wound through the Colorado town and mountains like a warning.
    Determined not to back out now, Lelandi ignored her gut instinct telling her this was a bad idea and pushed open the tavern’s heavy oak door, the rusted hinges squealing, jarring her taut nerves.

    Several bearded men and the bartender turned to stare at her and at once she feared the worst””they saw straight through her disguise.

    Spying unoccupied tables at the opposite end of the tavern, dark, perfect for her needs, Lelandi headed for the most obscure one, but her skin prickled with unease when the place remained deathly quiet. When she took a seat, the door swung open and two men entered, their gazes on the barkeep until he nodded his head in Lelandi’s direction, warning them of the stranger in their midst.



  15. Sandra Barkevich
    March 12th, 2007 at 6:59 pm · Link

    Elizabeth squeezed her eyes tight and turned her face away from the wicked-looking blade. She’d seen what it could do. Knew first hand the destruction it could bring.
    The death.
    “Please,” she whispered, a tear slipping down her cheek. “I…I can’t do this.”
    Cold steel grazed the skin exposed by her low bodice and she flinched. Her tormentor shifted closer in the confined carriage. “Oh, but you will.
    ______________________

    OMG! I’m so excited to still be in it! Congrats to the other remaining contestants. The judges really have their work cut out for them. Thank you again, Karin.

    Way to go, LaDonna. That is very exciting news. Here’s hoping there is more where that came from. *bg*

    Sandy 🙂
    Sandra Barkevich – Romance Author
    *March 31, 2007 at Sandra’s Goings On – Guest Blogger, Anna Campbell – Claiming the Courtesan



  16. Dulcie Sorenson
    March 12th, 2007 at 11:15 pm · Link

    “Just keep on driving, Mister,” Moxie said as she struggled to keep the gun in her hand from shaking as she aimed it at the man’s head.

    He turned to look down the barrel of the gun, his eyes then trailing up her arm to look into her face. She tried to put on a hard, outlawish-looking expression, but it wasn’t working””it’s hard to look evil when you’ve got curly red hair and freckles.

    “You’re joking, right?” He gave her a hopeful little smile, while his eye cut over to the gun pointed at his chin.

    “Nope, dead serious. Drive on out of here and nobody gets hurt.” She gestured with the gun toward the driveway leading out of the sun baked hotel parking lot.

    “Great,” he mumbled, “I’m being abducted by a pixie.”

    ——-

    I can’t believe I made another round. This is SO much fun. Good luck everyone.



  17. Mary Ann Chulick
    March 12th, 2007 at 8:21 pm · Link

    Joshua shuddered as the massive red door creaked open, allowing the stench of brimstone to steal into the room. Soon he would have to pass through that horrifying door”“unless he could come up with some way to evade his fate.

    He strode over to the Waiting Room clerk, a fat man whose inadequate wings fluttered anxiously as Joshua banged his fist on the desk. “Pray tell me, am I destined to go through that infernal door, or is there a path to redemption?”

    “Geez, Doc, it’s kinda late to be thinking about redeeming yourself.” Eyeing him curiously, the clerk added, “Usually you gotta commit one of the three biggies to get the red-door treatment”“rape, murder, or egregious pollution of natural resources”“so what’d you do?”

    “‘Twas closest to murder,” Joshua said, shame and regret searing him as he considered his wasted life, his great failure, his final disgrace. And yet he’d signed up as a surgeon in the Continental Army with the sole intention of helping his fellow man””including his courageous but reckless younger brother.

    “I’m still waitin’ on your orders, but I’ll send up Form A105″”Request for Redemption,” the clerk said.



  18. D'Ann Linscott-Dunham
    March 12th, 2007 at 11:36 pm · Link

    “Damn, it’s hotter than the devil’s backyard out here.” Castana Castillo took her hands
    from the steering wheel just long enough to swipe at the river of sweat running down the nape of her neck and to adjust the volume on George Strait’s “Amarillo by Morning”. The truck and two-horse trailer swerved, and she quickly regained control of the rig, but not before something bounced off the right front fender with a sickening thud.

    Oh, no, what now?

    Braking as hard as she dared, Castana lurched to a stop, half fell out of the pickup and stumbled back to see what ““or who”“ she’d struck. She stared in disbelief at the crumpled body beside the road. “Oh, God, please don’t be dead,” she prayed, falling to her knees beside a bloodied man who stared unblinking at the Arizona sky.

    “I’m alive,” he groaned. Turning sage-blue eyes her direction he added, “No thanks to you.”



  19. D'Ann Linscott-Dunham
    March 12th, 2007 at 11:42 pm · Link

    This one, please! The last one has a mistake. Bleh.
    _________________________________________________

    “Damn, it’s hotter than the devil’s backyard out here.” Castana Castillo took her hands from the steering wheel just long enough to swipe at the river of sweat running down the nape of her neck and to adjust the volume on George Strait’s
    “Amarillo by Morning”. The truck and two-horse trailer swerved, and she quickly regained control of the rig, but not before something bounced off the right front fender with a sickening thud.

    Oh, no, what now?

    Braking as hard as she dared, Castana lurched to a stop, half fell out of the pickup and stumbled back to see what ““or who”“ she’d struck. She stared in disbelief at the crumpled body beside the road. “Oh, God, please don’t be dead,” she prayed, falling to her knees beside a bloodied man who stared unblinking at the Arizona sky.

    “I’m alive,” he groaned. Turning sage-blue eyes her direction he added, “No thanks to you.”



  20. Rachel
    March 13th, 2007 at 4:25 am · Link

    Lord, that man was gorgeous.

    Of course, that was why I was standing in his office on a cold, wet Tuesday morning, dressed only in a form-fitting ruby red dress and matching strappy heels.

    I was a little cold, but not enough to make me rethink my wardrobe choice ““ long legs and perky feet were my only real assets, so I had no choice but to show them. It wasn’t as if I could rely on my *breasts* to carry the outfit ““ nope, left to their own devices, they’d let the team down every time. So I’d worn a push-up bra to maximise their potential and tried to draw attention in a downward, more beneficial direction.

    But this man in front of me – I doubted he had a single body part that wasn’t pulling its weight. I sighed in appreciation and allowed myself a moment to stare at the perfection of form that was Matt Malone.

    Then, heavenly moment over, I dragged my focus from Mr Sexalicious back to my whole reason for being there. The Plan.



  21. Rachel
    March 13th, 2007 at 4:28 am · Link

    Thanks once again for the contest, Karin. And to any previous judges who may now be following – thanks to you too!

    I’ve been sad to see some of my favourite lines leaving the past few weeks, but am loving seeing the stories unfold a little further each week for the ones who’ve stayed.

    🙂 Rachel



  22. Julie
    March 13th, 2007 at 12:11 pm · Link

    “I can make a woman come using just my mouth.”

    George Beringer squinted through an alcoholic haze at his friend Damian Hunt, Viscount Atherton, trying to figure out exactly what Damian meant by that remark. They were both much too drunk, but then, what else was there to do on a cold winter’s night tucked away here at the Atherton estate, except discuss horses and politics, and now, obviously, sex?

    “What’s so impressive about that “” I’ve never met a woman yet who could resist a man’s mouth on her private lips,” George declared.

    “Oh, but I’m not talking about using my mouth on her,” Damian said with a slow smile, “I’m talking about making her come using just the power of my words.”

    “Balderdash,” George cried, nearly dropping his wineglass, “you may have a well-deserved reputation as a ladies’ man, you scoundrel, but it’s impossible to make a woman climax using just words.”

    “Care to place a small wager on that?” Damian challenged, quirking an eyebrow.

    Next to sex, gambling was George’s favorite activity “” the night had suddenly gotten much more interesting.

    “I’ll place a large wager on it, you arrogant bastard — my London townhouse says you can’t do it!”



  23. Julie
    March 13th, 2007 at 12:12 pm · Link

    I’m thrilled to still be part of this contest, Karin, and in the company of such talented women!

    Julie



  24. Karin
    March 13th, 2007 at 12:59 pm · Link

    It must be that half nekkid cop on the front page, Stacey. Look at it this way, you have something to look forward to when you get home. 😉



  25. Patricia Detta
    March 13th, 2007 at 8:58 pm · Link

    Through the darkness the child ran, dogging the woman’s heels. Short, angular legs that had never seen an ounce of baby fat, churned through the sweating foliage. The damp heat tightened, stealing her breath as the tropical jungle closed around her.

    “Mama,” the child whispered and the faint sound of her own voice was comforting when everything around her breathed death. She reached for the hand her mother offered, holding with desperate strength to the only person who might save her from the evil lurking in the shrouded Cambodian night.

    A monkey screeched, twigs snapped and only her mother’s grip kept her from bolting off the path as what sounded like footsteps ranged through the jungle.

    “It is not the Khmer Rouge, little one,” her mother soothed in careful French, the language their captors didn’t understand.

    The child bit her lip, the sharp pain making her forget the ache in her side but not what roamed in the dark shadows. She fought the fear, squeezing her mother’s hand, knowing that it would take both their strength to survive, just like it always had.



  26. Alice Fairbanks-Burton
    March 13th, 2007 at 9:52 pm · Link

    The man lay face-up in a pool of his own blood. Kyra Walsh recoiled but not in terror, she’d seen dead bodies before. In her other life, not here.

    Recognition flashed – even in death the curly, black hair now tinged by a dull, reddish-brown, the bushy uni-brow, and the pointy nose all combined to give Larry Jones a look of cruelty. What had the bastard been up to at her construction site?

    Her heart jerked like the rev of a jackhammer. Here’s one problem the Big Brothers/Big Sisters program sure doesn’t cover with mentors”“how to tell your “little sister” her uncle is dead in ten easy steps. Poor Lani, between her mother’s emotional abandonment and her cousins’ harassment, how much could one kid take? Larry wasn’t her favorite person but she wouldn’t wish him dead, well maybe . . .



  27. Mary Marvella
    March 14th, 2007 at 1:28 pm · Link

    “Maybe I should become a lesbian for a week,” I blurted.
    Carol choked on what was left of her watered down frozen strawberry daiquiri.
    I intended to pat her back, but she had become a blur ““ three too many daiquiris for me ““ so even the beige walls of my den seemed to move.
    Where the hell did that come from?” Carol asked, staring at me as if I’d grown two heads.
    I gulped the rest of my drink and said in a voice I knew sounded like a whine, “Don’t
    know what else to do.”
    “Spill, right now, Margo,” Carol ordered as she banged her glass on the magazine-covered, white coffee table.
    I hiccuped, then answered, “Jay’s coming back to town.”
    I scratched my head, but could barely feel it.
    Carol’s eyes didn’t look so clear when she asked, “And you want to become a lesbian why?”

    ~~~~~~
    Do it now, Mary. Punch the send button! You can do this.



  28. Mary Marvella
    March 14th, 2007 at 1:30 pm · Link

    Hey, should I try to fix the line glitch above? Don’t know why it happened.



  29. Elisabeth
    March 14th, 2007 at 5:21 pm · Link

    Yeah, that half-naked cop gets me everytime too. 😉 But I’m not complaining. 🙂



  30. Marion Gillespie
    March 14th, 2007 at 6:14 pm · Link

    Kenzie Summers swiveled on the bar stool, her gaze encompassing every inch of the lively room in an attempt to find someone to ruin her reputation.
    Every hormone in her body clicked to attention when she saw him, the epitome of pure sin, weaving through the gyrating couples on the dance floor.
    “Aren’t you supposed to be at your engagement party, Kenzie?” her friend Nate, the bartender asked.
    “Hardly an engagement, more like a life sentence,” Kenzie scowled, her attention momentarily distracted from the handsome stranger who’d taken a seat three barstools down.
    The first she’d even known she was engaged was when her father had shown her the announcement he’d put in the paper and since then, she’d fought with him constantly, telling him she had no intention of becoming a perfect Stepford wife to a man she’d never met.
    “Right about now, Mr. Jackson Rockingham the Third is realizing that he’s been stood up,” she told Nate as she glanced to her left, suddenly losing herself in the bluest eyes she’d ever seen.
    Her pulse leapt at the interest in those eyes and accelerated into overdrive when he slid off the barstool and headed her way.
    “Is having the night from hell justification for drowning ones sorrows?” he murmured, his husky voice weaving around Kenzie like a lover’s touch.
    “Drowning your sorrows seems like a waste of time when it’s just as easy to cross over the fine line from Hell to Heaven,” Kenzie said as she turned toward him.



  31. Tracey
    March 14th, 2007 at 9:44 pm · Link

    Oh my – these are fantastic lines – I can’t wait until next week to see what is coming next.



  32. Cheryel Hutton
    March 15th, 2007 at 6:07 am · Link

    “Some wild animal is going to eat you alive!”

    The voice coming through the cell phone had Kia rolling her eyes, as she turned her car off the main road and through the narrow band of dark woods leading to her new home. The gorgeous, one-hundred year old, two-story house came into view, and she gasped, “Oh my God!”

    “It *is* a wild animal, isn’t it? I knew it!” her sister’s voice got higher pitched with each word.

    “Chill, Sydney. The only animal out here is Dracula,” Kia said, closing the phone over her sister’s protests.

    The cell rang again almost immediately, but Kia ignored it as she slid out of her Jeep and motioned for the huge black Labrador to follow her. Her heart kicked into a higher gear as she stood staring at her very own piece of history.

    For a moment, she was sure she saw a woman’s face in one of the second floor windows. The face vanished, leaving her with the disturbing realization that she heard no human sound, that she saw no human handiwork other than her own house and car.



  33. Sharon
    March 15th, 2007 at 7:01 am · Link

    Like a snake, coiled and ready to strike, it’d been waiting for him when he’d arrived at work. And as it had when he’d first read it, his stomach knotted and cold fear wrapped around him.
    He’d stared at the words, reading them but not processing them.

    No, that was a damn lie”“he’d processed them all right, and what his mind told him was inconceivable.

    The paper in his hand crinkled and he turned his gaze to it, smoothing the wrinkles out against his thigh and scanning it again even though he’d memorized it days ago.

    *Dear Mr. MacMillan*”“not Dear Mac or even Mac, hell, it should have said, Dear John because that’s exactly what it was”“a Dear John letter.

    Mac closed his eyes, the barrier of numbness that had first descended long gone, leaving enough room for the fear and loneliness and grief to sneak in.

    She’d left him.

    Up and walked out with nothing but a formal letter thanking him for her career and nothing else.



  34. Meretta ~ American Title Finalist
    March 15th, 2007 at 10:43 am · Link

    Across the crowded ferry, the little girl looked up and Gabe Moreau ducked his head, praying she’d sit tight and stay the hell away. Blunt fingernails trenched into sweat slicked palms and a phantom tingle in his right palm itched to feel the reassuring weight of his standard issue Glock.

    But the Glock was gone.

    Along with his badge.

    Above him, a green awning blocked the bright July sun, a wayward corner flapping with the ocean’s stiff breeze, but neither noise nor movement distracted his traitorous mind from the waif of a girl or her piercing gaze.

    A gaze that left him paralyzed, as if the meanest SOB he’d ever hauled downtown had a boot planted across his throat and the cold blue steel of a barrel pressed against his teeth.

    Unbelievable. He’d been rendered useless by the unassuming glance of a mere child.

    A nauseating burst of steamed blood pulsed through his arteries and his stomach pitched.



  35. Meretta ~ American Title Finalist
    March 15th, 2007 at 10:44 am · Link

    Thanks again for the opportunity, Karin!



  36. Elisabeth
    March 15th, 2007 at 11:06 am · Link

    She’d become nothing more than a common thief.

    No, not common – nothing about Egyptologist Katherine Meyer could ever be construed as common, especially when she was legally dead.

    Kat checked her reflection in the bathroom mirror one last time, took a deep breath to settle the nerves in her stomach and told herself she looked pretty good for a seven-year-old corpse. The black slacks and matching jacket were perfect, nothing fancy, not one thing about them the slightest bit memorable. No one glancing her direction tonight would ever see anything other than the professional assistant she resembled, and that was precisely the way she wanted it. The less attention she drew, the safer she’d be, because being here wasn’t a choice, it was a matter of life and death.

    Her stomach rolled as she turned down the long hallway, as her sensible flats clicked along the cement floor. Muffled music from the party out front drifted to her ears; ahead, a security guard looked up from his post at the end of the corridor and gave her the once-over.

    She smiled what she hoped was a confident grin as she approached and flashed the ID badge she’d lifted from a Worthington’s employee only days before.



  37. Linda
    March 16th, 2007 at 6:03 am · Link

    “Your sorry ass is going to be even sorrier, Jimmy Ray!”

    The bat connected with a sickening, satisfying crunch. Jimmy Ray’s pained, horrified expression should have sent a spurt of triumph through Angel, but it didn’t.

    “You crazy bitch!”

    She tightened her grip on the scarred Louisville Slugger. She had a choice ““ take another swing at her ex’s ego by hitting him where it would hurt him most or walk away before the cops showed up and she lost what little hard-won dignity she had left.

    Too late.

    Blue lights flaring in lazy swirls, a Chandler County sheriff’s car pulled into the parking lot. If God were listening to her this one time, Cookie would not be in that car.



  38. LaDonna
    March 16th, 2007 at 8:18 am · Link

    Who said dying was easy?

    Ruby May stepped out the front door of the Delta Funeral Home in what had been her good luck dress–until they buried her in it. She studied her reflection in passing, and realized dying in Delta had a downside; she was a Blue Light Special on heels.

    The town slowly receded as Ruby walked the winding Tennessee roads, reliving life moments all strung together like glass beads. Life didn’t come with a damn rulebook–a good thing since ignoring advice had been her personal mantra. She had led an amoral life, impossible to sugarcoat, and there was a high probability her view would be outside those pearly gates her mama talked about.

    In the distance, the old homestead sprawled across Cooper Mountain and Ruby ran to it, like a child bolting into a mama’s arms. The heart of the place welcomed her, surprising since she had high-tailed it out of town at the first bump in the road. Leaving a daughter for Syble to raise had shocked the good people of Delta, like every other shenanigan she’d pulled all in the name of Ruby.



  39. Anne
    March 16th, 2007 at 2:20 pm · Link

    As much as he’d hoped Lacey McLaren had gained a hundred pounds and sprouted horns in the five years since he’d last seen her, she hadn’t. Noah cursed, unable to pull his gaze away; if anything, she was more beautiful now than when they’d first met. His heart tripped over itself, his gut twisting into knots as he watched her lead the chestnut mare into the middle of the indoor arena and mount up.
    Thank God it was too damn hot for chaps today; the image of her ass framed in tight suede was one he really didn’t need to carry with him. Just the thought sent blood rushing south, causing his jeans to grow tighter around the zipper.
    “Does Lacey have a clue that it’s me, specifically, who’s come to look at buying her horses?” he asked, casting his half-brother a sidelong glance.
    Colin’s sly grin was all the answer he needed.
    “She’s expecting my brother,” he explained calmly, not taking his eyes off the horse and rider,”she just doesn’t know that you’re him.”

    “Seeing her reaction might just be worth the jetlag,” Noah said, unable to keep the bitterness from his tone.



  40. Diane Della Maggiora
    March 16th, 2007 at 3:52 pm · Link

    “Son, you’ve got more metal in you than the Terminator.”

    Immobile in a hospital bed with one leg in traction, one arm fractured, and bruises painted on his body like modern art on a canvas, Garrett McCloud found no humor in his doctor’s joke.

    Refraining from comment, he watched Dr. Shaw flip open the chart and wrinkle his lips while he studied whatever mysterious gibberish doctors wrote on the things. With his frizzy white hair, the good doctor remarkably resembled Einstein, and Garrett considered him as much a genius as the great scientist, in spite of the quirky, misplaced wit.

    Looking up, Dr. Shaw examined Garrett’s face and must have realized his joke flopped because he said, “Here’s the deal, Mr. McCloud, if you keep crashing, I don’t know if we can keep putting you together–even now, I can’t guarantee you’re not going to have a limp.”

    When he added, “Your knee resembled Humpty Dumpty after his great fall,” Garrett decided the doctor spent too much time with his grandkids.

    “I’m positive I’m paying a fortune for you and all the king’s men to patch me together again,” he growled.

    “You are,” the doctor agreed, scribbling notes on the chart before zeroing his gaze on Garrett and saying, “But my point is, racing motorcycles is a young man’s sport–it’s time for you to think about another career. Take my advice,” Dr. Shaw continued, tucking the chart back into place at the foot of the bed, “Blink those baby blues of yours at some beautiful woman, get married, have a family.”



  41. Theresa
    March 16th, 2007 at 9:11 pm · Link

    “Despite what you apparently believe,” Lieutenant Kathryn Glace snapped, the pale skin across her cheeks tightening and tinting peach, “I’ve given this a great deal of thought””the family is legitimate, and their unique. . .talents. . have proven significantly helpful in the past.”

    “I know who they are,” Nick said, trying to iron the grit from his voice. He knew what they were too: gypsies, tramps and thieves. Okay, maybe not tramps, but the thievery bit sure as hell fit. The con artist he’d been stuck with on the Riverside kidnapping, had charged the family a bundle for her so called services, only to deliver false hope and additional heartache. Significantly helpful? Hardly.

    “This isn’t a request, detective,” the lieutenant said, her blue eyes chilling, “you have no leads, no evidence and no suspects. What you do have, is a maniac terrorizing the cat lovers of Seattle.”



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