Karin Tabke | Author of Contemporary, Historical, and Paranormal Romance: Author of Sensual Romance
Karin Tabke | Author of Contemporary, Historical, and Paranormal Romance: Author of Sensual Romance


Round Ten!!!
March 19th, 2007

My judge this week loved all of the entries! As judges past she had great difficulty. I felt her pain. It really is getting beyond difficult to cull any entry.
Congrats to this week’s Terrific 20!! (heh, little play off on March Madness)

1. Death comes to all of us in many ways. It doesn’t consider how it leaves us to the mercy of others who must view our remains.
This time, death had come suddenly and without warning. The young man had been in his prime and died with a look of surprise on his face. There were still poker chips and cards set out for two other players on his table; beer bottles and ash trays covered the scarred laminate, and a bowl of potato chips were left uneaten.
He sat in his chair with a .22 slug in his forehead, with plenty of gunshot residue around the wound to show that the killer had walked right up to him and shot him. Blood had trailed down his face from the gaping hole in his forehead. He’d dropped his beer bottle on the floor and its golden liquid had pooled by his feet.
The room temperature was about fifty-two degrees.

2. Elizabeth squeezed her eyes tight and turned her face away from the wicked-looking blade. She’d seen what it could do. Knew first hand the destruction it could bring.
The death.
“Please,” she whispered, a tear slipping down her cheek. “I…I can’t do this.”
Cold steel grazed the skin exposed by her low bodice and she flinched. Her tormentor shifted closer in the confined carriage. “Oh, but you will.

3. “Damn loser recruit,” Captain Connors muttered as he sweltered in the alleyway, forced to endure the scents of week-old Chow Mein coming from the Dumpster he leaned against.
A mingle of sweet citrus and coconut strong enough to turn his stomach overpowered even the stench of the restaurant refuse surrounding him as the hairs rose on his arms. It was one of them, had to be, only shape-shifters gave off that cloying scent a recruiter could catch a whiff of a hundred yards away. He inhaled the rancid fumes rising from the pavement to clear the shifter smell from his nostrils.
Connors stayed leaning, body tense, as a gorgeous blonde strolled into the cramped, trash-filled alley like it was a neighborhood park at lunchtime. Shifter females were breath-taking, making you want, until you remembered what they were and worried about going to bed with Sue Ann and waking up with Jim Bob. He pushed out from the metal at his back, spit on the ground, and thought for the umpteenth time, God, he hated when they were female.
He inhaled deeply of her Shifter scent, verifying she was what she appeared to be and said, “Michael or Michelle?”
She reached up and grasped her breasts in two overflowing handfuls, looking him straight in the eye as she uttered in sultry tones, “It seems it is Michelle today.”

4. Joshua shuddered as the massive red door creaked open, allowing the stench of brimstone to steal into the room. Soon he would have to pass through that horrifying door–unless he could come up with some way to evade his fate.
He strode over to the Waiting Room clerk, a fat man whose inadequate wings fluttered anxiously as Joshua banged his fist on the desk. “Pray tell me, am I destined to go through that infernal door, or is there a path to redemption?”
“Geez, Doc, it’s kinda late to be thinking about redeeming yourself.” Eyeing him curiously, the clerk added, “Usually you gotta commit one of the three biggies to get the red-door treatment–rape, murder, or egregious pollution of natural resources–so what’d you do?”
“‘Twas closest to murder,” Joshua said, shame and regret searing him as he considered his wasted life, his great failure, his final disgrace. And yet he’d signed up as a surgeon in the Continental Army with the sole intention of helping his fellow man—including his courageous but reckless younger brother.
“I’m still waitin’ on your orders, but I’ll send up Form A105—Request for Redemption,” the clerk said.

5. Jack Sutton heard a whisper of movement a split second before an arm wrapped around his neck and something sharp plunged into his gut. The shocking reality that he’d just been stabbed registered as he was shoved to the cold, grease-stained concrete floor, his entire midsection on fire. Instinct forced him to his hands and knees before a hard shove sent him crashing back to the floor.
“You should’ve slit his throat,” a croaky, unfamiliar voice complained.
“He’ll be dead in an hour,” a second voice assured the first. “Come on, let’s get the cash register opened—if this don’t look like a robbery, we don’t get paid.”
Jack lay still as death, praying whoever these bastards were they’d hurry the hell up. If he could crawl to the phone and dial 9-1-1, he might have a chance.
Jesus, he was going to puke.

6. Jordan Blake always figured he’d go to hell someday, but he never expected it to be this soon. His first clue was a no-brainer, the sign posted outside the town limits read: Hades, Colorado, population two hundred and six.
He almost hit the second clue as he wheeled his Lexus onto Main Street and immediately swerved to avoid the horse tied to the hitching rail. Swearing under his breath, he parked across the street, then jerked on the rearview mirror to make sure he hadn’t been seeing things. Yeah, there was a horse tied to a hitching rail, all right.
He stepped out of his car and looked up and down the street, squinting against the fine mist that dampened his face. Not much to look at—a barber shop, some tiny crafty-looking store, a gas station/mini-mart/Laundromat, an old stone church, three houses, and a flat-faced building with a faded *Oleson’s Mercantile and Coffee* sign above the door. Between the name and the horse, he felt like he’d been transported onto the set of *Little House on the Prairie.*
Only the jagged peaks of the Rockies veiled by gloomy clouds weren’t no prairie, and the girl walking out of the mercantile with saddlebags slung over her shoulder wasn’t Laura Ingalls; Half-pint didn’t limp.

7. “Just keep on driving, Mister,” Moxie said as she struggled to keep the gun in her hand from shaking as she aimed it at the man’s head.
He turned to look down the barrel of the gun, his eyes then trailing up her arm to look into her face. She tried to put on a hard, outlawish-looking expression, but it wasn’t working—it’s hard to look evil when you’ve got curly red hair and freckles.
“You’re joking, right?” He gave her a hopeful little smile, while his eye cut over to the gun pointed at his chin.
“Nope, dead serious. Drive on out of here and nobody gets hurt.” She gestured with the gun toward the driveway leading out of the sun baked hotel parking lot.
“Great,” he mumbled, “I’m being abducted by a pixie.”

8. Lord, that man was gorgeous.
Of course, that was why I was standing in his office on a cold, wet Tuesday morning, dressed only in a form-fitting ruby red dress and matching strappy heels.
I was a little cold, but not enough to make me rethink my wardrobe choice – long legs and perky feet were my only real assets, so I had no choice but to show them. It wasn’t as if I could rely on my *breasts* to carry the outfit – nope, left to their own devices, they’d let the team down every time. So I’d worn a push-up bra to maximise their potential and tried to draw attention in a downward, more beneficial direction.
But this man in front of me – I doubted he had a single body part that wasn’t pulling its weight. I sighed in appreciation and allowed myself a moment to stare at the perfection of form that was Matt Malone.
Then, heavenly moment over, I dragged my focus from Mr Sexalicious back to my whole reason for being there. The Plan.

9. “I can make a woman come using just my mouth.”
George Beringer squinted through an alcoholic haze at his friend Damian Hunt, Viscount Atherton, trying to figure out exactly what Damian meant by that remark. They were both much too drunk, but then, what else was there to do on a cold winter’s night tucked away here at the Atherton estate, except discuss horses and politics, and now, obviously, sex?
“What’s so impressive about that — I’ve never met a woman yet who could resist a man’s mouth on her private lips,” George declared.
“Oh, but I’m not talking about using my mouth on her,” Damian said with a slow smile, “I’m talking about making her come using just the power of my words.”
“Balderdash,” George cried, nearly dropping his wineglass, “you may have a well-deserved reputation as a ladies’ man, you scoundrel, but it’s impossible to make a woman climax using just words.”
“Care to place a small wager on that?” Damian challenged, quirking an eyebrow.
Next to sex, gambling was George’s favorite activity — the night had suddenly gotten much more interesting.
“I’ll place a large wager on it, you arrogant bastard — my London townhouse says you can’t do it!”

10. Through the darkness the child ran, dogging the woman’s heels. Short, angular legs that had never seen an ounce of baby fat, churned through the sweating foliage. The damp heat tightened, stealing her breath as the tropical jungle closed around her.
“Mama,” the child whispered and the faint sound of her own voice was comforting when everything around her breathed death. She reached for the hand her mother offered, holding with desperate strength to the only person who might save her from the evil lurking in the shrouded Cambodian night.
A monkey screeched, twigs snapped and only her mother’s grip kept her from bolting off the path as what sounded like footsteps ranged through the jungle.
“It is not the Khmer Rouge, little one,” her mother soothed in careful French, the language their captors didn’t understand.
The child bit her lip, the sharp pain making her forget the ache in her side but not what roamed in the dark shadows. She fought the fear, squeezing her mother’s hand, knowing that it would take both their strength to survive, just like it always had.

11. The man lay face-up in a pool of his own blood. Kyra Walsh recoiled but not in terror, she’d seen dead bodies before. In her other life, not here.
Recognition flashed – even in death the curly, black hair now tinged by a dull, reddish-brown, the bushy uni-brow, and the pointy nose all combined to give Larry Jones a look of cruelty. What had the bastard been up to at her construction site?
Her heart jerked like the rev of a jackhammer. Here’s one problem the Big Brothers/Big Sisters program sure doesn’t cover with mentors–how to tell your “little sister” her uncle is dead in ten easy steps. Poor Lani, between her mother’s emotional abandonment and her cousins’ harassment, how much could one kid take? Larry wasn’t her favorite person but she wouldn’t wish him dead, well maybe . . .

12. “Maybe I should become a lesbian for a week,” I blurted.
Carol choked on what was left of her watered down frozen strawberry daiquiri.
I intended to pat her back, but she had become a blur – three too many daiquiris for me – so even the beige walls of my den seemed to move.
Where the hell did that come from?” Carol asked, staring at me as if I’d grown two heads.
I gulped the rest of my drink and said in a voice I knew sounded like a whine, “Don’t
know what else to do.”
“Spill, right now, Margo,” Carol ordered as she banged her glass on the magazine-covered, white coffee table.
I hiccuped, then answered, “Jay’s coming back to town.”
I scratched my head, but could barely feel it.
Carol’s eyes didn’t look so clear when she asked, “And you want to become a lesbian why?”

13. Like a snake, coiled and ready to strike, it’d been waiting for him when he’d arrived at work. And as it had when he’d first read it, his stomach knotted and cold fear wrapped around him.
He’d stared at the words, reading them but not processing them.
No, that was a damn lie–he’d processed them all right, and what his mind told him was inconceivable.
The paper in his hand crinkled and he turned his gaze to it, smoothing the wrinkles out against his thigh and scanning it again even though he’d memorized it days ago.
*Dear Mr. MacMillan*–not Dear Mac or even Mac, hell, it should have said, Dear John because that’s exactly what it was–a Dear John letter.
Mac closed his eyes, the barrier of numbness that had first descended long gone, leaving enough room for the fear and loneliness and grief to sneak in.
She’d left him.
Up and walked out with nothing but a formal letter thanking him for her career and nothing else.

14. Across the crowded ferry, the little girl looked up and Gabe Moreau ducked his head, praying she’d sit tight and stay the hell away. Blunt fingernails trenched into sweat slicked palms and a phantom tingle in his right palm itched to feel the reassuring weight of his standard issue Glock.
But the Glock was gone.
Along with his badge.
Above him, a green awning blocked the bright July sun, a wayward corner flapping with the ocean’s stiff breeze, but neither noise nor movement distracted his traitorous mind from the waif of a girl or her piercing gaze.
A gaze that left him paralyzed, as if the meanest SOB he’d ever hauled downtown had a boot planted across his throat and the cold blue steel of a barrel pressed against his teeth.
Unbelievable. He’d been rendered useless by the unassuming glance of a mere child.
A nauseating burst of steamed blood pulsed through his arteries and his stomach pitched.

15. She’d become nothing more than a common thief.
No, not common – nothing about Egyptologist Katherine Meyer could ever be construed as common, especially when she was legally dead.
Kat checked her reflection in the bathroom mirror one last time, took a deep breath to settle the nerves in her stomach and told herself she looked pretty good for a seven-year-old corpse. The black slacks and matching jacket were perfect, nothing fancy, not one thing about them the slightest bit memorable. No one glancing her direction tonight would ever see anything other than the professional assistant she resembled, and that was precisely the way she wanted it. The less attention she drew, the safer she’d be, because being here wasn’t a choice, it was a matter of life and death.
Her stomach rolled as she turned down the long hallway, as her sensible flats clicked along the cement floor. Muffled music from the party out front drifted to her ears; ahead, a security guard looked up from his post at the end of the corridor and gave her the once-over.
She smiled what she hoped was a confident grin as she approached and flashed the ID badge she’d lifted from a Worthington’s employee only days before.

16. “Your sorry ass is going to be even sorrier, Jimmy Ray!”
The bat connected with a sickening, satisfying crunch. Jimmy Ray’s pained, horrified expression should have sent a spurt of triumph through Angel, but it didn’t.
“You crazy bitch!”
She tightened her grip on the scarred Louisville Slugger. She had a choice – take another swing at her ex’s ego by hitting him where it would hurt him most or walk away before the cops showed up and she lost what little hard-won dignity she had left.
Too late.
Blue lights flaring in lazy swirls, a Chandler County sheriff’s car pulled into the parking lot. If God were listening to her this one time, Cookie would not be in that car.

17. Who said dying was easy?
Ruby May stepped out the front door of the Delta Funeral Home in what had been her good luck dress–until they buried her in it. She studied her reflection in passing, and realized dying in Delta had a downside; she was a Blue Light Special on heels.
The town slowly receded as Ruby walked the winding Tennessee roads, reliving life moments all strung together like glass beads. Life didn’t come with a damn rulebook–a good thing since ignoring advice had been her personal mantra. She had led an amoral life, impossible to sugarcoat, and there was a high probability her view would be outside those pearly gates her mama talked about.
In the distance, the old homestead sprawled across Cooper Mountain and Ruby ran to it, like a child bolting into a mama’s arms. The heart of the place welcomed her, surprising since she had high-tailed it out of town at the first bump in the road. Leaving a daughter for Syble to raise had shocked the good people of Delta, like every other shenanigan she’d pulled all in the name of Ruby.

18. As much as he’d hoped Lacey McLaren had gained a hundred pounds and sprouted horns in the five years since he’d last seen her, she hadn’t. Noah cursed, unable to pull his gaze away; if anything, she was more beautiful now than when they’d first met. His heart tripped over itself, his gut twisting into knots as he watched her lead the chestnut mare into the middle of the indoor arena and mount up.
Thank God it was too damn hot for chaps today; the image of her ass framed in tight suede was one he really didn’t need to carry with him. Just the thought sent blood rushing south, causing his jeans to grow tighter around the zipper.
“Does Lacey have a clue that it’s me, specifically, who’s come to look at buying her horses?” he asked, casting his half-brother a sidelong glance.
Colin’s sly grin was all the answer he needed.
“She’s expecting my brother,” he explained calmly, not taking his eyes off the horse and rider,”she just doesn’t know that you’re him.”
“Seeing her reaction might just be worth the jetlag,” Noah said, unable to keep the bitterness from his tone.

19. “Son, you’ve got more metal in you than the Terminator.”
Immobile in a hospital bed with one leg in traction, one arm fractured, and bruises painted on his body like modern art on a canvas, Garrett McCloud found no humor in his doctor’s joke.
Refraining from comment, he watched Dr. Shaw flip open the chart and wrinkle his lips while he studied whatever mysterious gibberish doctors wrote on the things. With his frizzy white hair, the good doctor remarkably resembled Einstein, and Garrett considered him as much a genius as the great scientist, in spite of the quirky, misplaced wit.
Looking up, Dr. Shaw examined Garrett’s face and must have realized his joke flopped because he said, “Here’s the deal, Mr. McCloud, if you keep crashing, I don’t know if we can keep putting you together–even now, I can’t guarantee you’re not going to have a limp.”
When he added, “Your knee resembled Humpty Dumpty after his great fall,” Garrett decided the doctor spent too much time with his grandkids.
“I’m positive I’m paying a fortune for you and all the king’s men to patch me together again,” he growled.
“You are,” the doctor agreed, scribbling notes on the chart before zeroing his gaze on Garrett and saying, “But my point is, racing motorcycles is a young man’s sport–it’s time for you to think about another career. Take my advice,” Dr. Shaw continued, tucking the chart back into place at the foot of the bed, “Blink those baby blues of yours at some beautiful woman, get married, have a family.”

20. “Despite what you apparently believe,” Lieutenant Kathryn Glace snapped, the pale skin across her cheeks tightening and tinting peach, “I’ve given this a great deal of thought—the family is legitimate, and their unique. . .talents. . have proven significantly helpful in the past.”
“I know who they are,” Nick said, trying to iron the grit from his voice. He knew what they were too: gypsies, tramps and thieves. Okay, maybe not tramps, but the thievery bit sure as hell fit. The con artist he’d been stuck with on the Riverside kidnapping, had charged the family a bundle for her so called services, only to deliver false hope and additional heartache. Significantly helpful? Hardly.
“This isn’t a request, detective,” the lieutenant said, her blue eyes chilling, “you have no leads, no evidence and no suspects. What you do have, is a maniac terrorizing the cat lovers of Seattle.”

Good luck, everyone!
K*

39 comments to “Round Ten!!!”

  1. Marion Gillespie
    March 19th, 2007 at 2:12 pm · Link

    Well, I didn’t make it this round by it’s been a wild ride. I’ve enjoyed every second of it and I’ll be keeping watch each week. Best of luck to all who remain. It’s been a pleasure to ‘meet’ all of you. Marion

    Karin-my sincerest thanks to you and the judges for a great experience. 🙂



  2. Karin
    March 19th, 2007 at 2:16 pm · Link

    Marion, it was a pleasure meeting you too! I’ve really enjoyed your lines. Don’t be a stranger.



  3. Cheryel Hutton
    March 19th, 2007 at 2:59 pm · Link

    Well, I held on longer than the last time 🙂

    Thanks, Karin! It was fun. Good luck to everybody still in the game!



  4. Mary Marvella
    March 19th, 2007 at 3:58 pm · Link

    I hate to see some of us leave, but I’m glad I’m in for another week!

    Way cool!!!!!!!!!

    Just yelled so loudly my throat hurt, but I’d do it again!

    Mary Barfield



  5. Karin
    March 19th, 2007 at 4:36 pm · Link

    Whaaaaat? D’Ann and Cheryel too? :(((

    Mary glad you are hanging in there.



  6. Debbie Dunn
    March 19th, 2007 at 4:55 pm · Link

    It is not surprising the judge had such a hard time this round. All the entries are so wonderful. Though I’ve been lurking since my cut, I come running over every Monday to see which of my favorites make it to the next round. Oh, who am I kidding? I have really been enjoying them all and hate to see any of them go. Congratulations and good luck to all of you who continue on.



  7. Stacey Netzel
    March 19th, 2007 at 5:01 pm · Link

    I’m still in, but one of my favorites is out. 🙁

    So strange to be cheering for the competition, yet really nice.

    Thanks, Karin.



  8. D'Ann Linscott-Dunham
    March 19th, 2007 at 2:54 pm · Link

    Karin,
    Thank you for a fabulous, fun-filled ride!
    It’s been a blast!
    Good luck to everyone else!



  9. LaDonna
    March 19th, 2007 at 6:03 pm · Link

    It’s really tough seeing anyone leave. Karin, it’s got to kill ya every Monday looking at those results first. Good luck to all of you. I’ve enjoyed everyone’s lines. Such a talented bunch of writers.

    I’m thrilled to still be in the running.



  10. Laurie Wood
    March 19th, 2007 at 6:03 pm · Link

    Death comes to all of us in many ways. It doesn’t consider how it leaves us to the mercy of others who must view our remains.

    This time, death had come suddenly and without warning. The young man had been in his prime and died with a look of surprise on his face. There were still poker chips and cards set out for two other players on his table; beer bottles and ash trays covered the scarred laminate, and a bowl of potato chips were left uneaten.

    He sat in his chair with a .22 slug in his forehead, with plenty of gunshot residue stippled around the wound to show that the killer had walked right up to him and shot him. Blood had trailed down his face from the gaping hole in his forehead. He’d dropped his beer bottle on the floor and its golden liquid had pooled by his feet.

    The room temperature was about fifty-two degrees. The killer had turned the air conditioner up on purpose.

    **************************************
    What a wild ride! Thanks to all for the congrats and good wishes – and a big thank you again to Karin and the judges. I’m thrilled to be in for another week…every Monday I’m checking in from noon on. 🙂



  11. Donna Kowalczyk
    March 19th, 2007 at 6:25 pm · Link

    I’m thrilled (and amazed) to have made it again, but surprised by some that were cut. I love looking for my faves almost as much as my own entry…LOL Thank you, Karin and the judges!



  12. Karin
    March 19th, 2007 at 6:30 pm · Link

    It is very hard to get the numbers back from the judge. I stopped looking at entries weeks ago. A few weeks ago the judge I had lined up couldn’t do it. I panicked and thought, Oh shit! I’ll have to pick five! I can’t!!!!Thank God I had another judge come to my rescue. Otherwise I would have canceled the round that week.

    And oddly enough, this year has been harder for me to see entries go than last year. Not sure why. I am thoroughly enjoying the camaraderie.



  13. Tracey
    March 19th, 2007 at 7:01 pm · Link

    It such a bitter-sweet experience each week coming here and seeing who made it through and who didn’t. I’m having just as a nerve-wracking time and I’m not in it. But I remember the feeling from last time of looking through the entries with one eye closed to see if my lines were still there then whooping loudly and scaring everyone in the office when they were.

    :o( – At least one of my favs didn’t make it this week – but the competition is soooo tough. It is hard to have favs though because they are all fab. Hugs to the girls who dropped out.

    To all still there – wooo hoooo and way to go. ::cheering::



  14. Amanda
    March 19th, 2007 at 9:04 pm · Link

    “Damn loser recruit,” Captain Connors muttered as he sweltered in the alleyway, forced to endure the scents of week-old Chow Mein coming from the Dumpster he leaned against.

    A mingle of sweet citrus and coconut strong enough to turn his stomach overpowered even the stench of the restaurant refuse surrounding him as the hairs rose on his arms. It was one of them, had to be, only shape-shifters gave off that cloying scent a recruiter could catch a whiff of a hundred yards away. He inhaled the rancid fumes rising from the pavement to clear the shifter smell from his nostrils.

    Connors stayed leaning, body tense, as a gorgeous blonde strolled into the cramped, trash-filled alley like it was a neighborhood park at lunchtime. Shifter females were breath-taking, making you want, until you remembered what they were and worried about going to bed with Sue Ann and waking up with Jim Bob. He pushed out from the metal at his back, spit on the ground, and thought for the umpteenth time, God, he hated when they were female.

    He inhaled deeply of her Shifter scent, verifying she was what she appeared to be and said, “Michael or Michelle?”

    She reached up and grasped her breasts in two overflowing handfuls, looking him straight in the eye as she uttered in sultry tones, “It seems it is Michelle today.”

    His breath caught in a gasp as she reached down and grabbed her crotch, his gaze forced to follow.

    *********
    Karin, thank you for this opportunity and thanks to all the congrats I’ve received on reaching this far. Wow! Round 10!



  15. Donna Kowalczyk
    March 19th, 2007 at 10:46 pm · Link

    Jack Sutton heard a whisper of movement a split second before an arm wrapped around his neck and something sharp plunged into his gut. The shocking reality that he’d just been stabbed registered as he was shoved to the cold, grease-stained concrete floor, his entire midsection on fire. Instinct forced him to his hands and knees before a hard shove sent him crashing back to the floor.

    “You should’ve slit his throat,” a croaky, unfamiliar voice complained.

    “He’ll be dead in an hour,” a second voice assured the first. “Come on, let’s get the cash register opened””if this don’t look like a robbery, we don’t get paid.”

    Jack lay still as death, praying whoever these bastards were they’d hurry the hell up. If he could crawl to the phone and dial 9-1-1, he might have a chance.

    Jesus, he was going to puke. *Concentrate, Sutton,* he thought, swallowing hard, choking down bile.



  16. Sandra Barkevich
    March 19th, 2007 at 9:04 pm · Link

    Elizabeth squeezed her eyes tight and turned her face away from the wicked-looking blade. She’d seen what it could do. Knew first hand the destruction it could bring.
    The death.
    “Please,” she whispered, a tear slipping down her cheek. “I…I can’t do this.”
    Cold steel grazed the skin exposed by her low bodice and she flinched. Her tormentor shifted closer in the confined carriage. “Oh, but you will. You know the consequences if you don’t, Lizzy.”
    _____________________

    Whoooo boy! I am so happy to still be in it. Thank you to the judges and to Karin. What a huge undertaking this must be. And the talent is just phenomenal. Good luck, Ladies!

    Sandy 🙂
    Sandra Barkevich – Romance Author
    *March 31, 2007 at Sandra’s Goings On – Guest Blogger, Anna Campbell – Claiming the Courtesan



  17. Alice Fairbanks-Burton
    March 20th, 2007 at 12:06 pm · Link

    The man lay face-up in a pool of his own blood. Kyra Walsh recoiled but not in terror, she’d seen dead bodies before. In her other life, not here.

    Recognition flashed – even in death the curly, black hair now tinged by a dull, reddish-brown, the bushy uni-brow, and the pointy nose all combined to give Larry Jones a look of cruelty. What had the bastard been up to at her construction site?

    Her heart jerked like the rev of a jackhammer. Here’s one problem the Big Brothers/Big Sisters program sure doesn’t cover with mentors”“how to tell your “little sister” her uncle is dead in ten easy steps. Poor Lani, between her mother’s emotional abandonment and her cousins’ harassment, how much could one kid take? Larry wasn’t her favorite person but she wouldn’t wish him dead, well maybe . . .

    Bending down, Kyra examined the poor son-of-a-bitch; the fresh corpse had congealed blood sticking to his skin and his right hand clenched a red Sharpie marker…except Larry was left handed.

    —————–
    This is so exciting! I can’t believe I’m still in. The competition is tight. Can’t we all win?

    Alice



  18. Meretta
    March 20th, 2007 at 2:12 pm · Link

    Across the crowded ferry, the little girl looked up and Gabe Moreau ducked his head, praying she’d sit tight and stay the hell away. Blunt fingernails trenched into sweat slicked palms and a phantom tingle in his right palm itched to feel the reassuring weight of his standard issue Glock.

    But the Glock was gone.

    Along with his badge.

    Above him, a green awning blocked the bright July sun, a wayward corner flapping with the ocean’s stiff breeze, but neither noise nor movement distracted his traitorous mind from the waif of a girl or her piercing gaze.

    A gaze that left him paralyzed, as if the meanest SOB he’d ever hauled downtown had a boot planted across his throat and the cold blue steel of a barrel pressed against his teeth.

    Unbelievable. He’d been rendered useless by the
    unassuming glance of a mere child.

    A nauseating burst of steamed blood pulsed through his arteries and his stomach pitched.

    Maybe the Sarge was right.

    ***

    Thanks, Karin! 🙂



  19. Stacey Netzel
    March 20th, 2007 at 2:55 pm · Link

    Jordan Blake always figured he’d go to hell someday, but he never expected it to be this soon. His first clue was a no-brainer, the sign posted outside the town limits read: Hades, Colorado, population two hundred and six.

    He almost hit the second clue as he wheeled his Lexus onto Main Street and immediately swerved to avoid the horse tied to the hitching rail. Swearing under his breath, he parked across the street, then jerked on the rearview mirror to make sure he hadn’t been seeing things. Yeah, there was a horse tied to a hitching rail, all right.

    He stepped out of his car and looked up and down the street, squinting against the fine mist that dampened his face. Not much to look at””a barber shop, some tiny crafty-looking store, a gas station/mini-mart/Laundromat, an old stone church, three houses, and a flat-faced building with a faded *Oleson’s Mercantile and Coffee* sign above the door. Between the name and the horse, he felt like he’d been transported onto the set of *Little House on the Prairie.*

    Only the jagged peaks of the Rockies veiled by gloomy clouds weren’t no prairie, and the girl walking out of the mercantile with saddlebags slung over her shoulder wasn’t Laura Ingalls; Half-pint didn’t limp.

    A gust of wind blew the hood of her dark green rain duster back, revealing a pale face and long hair the color of a vintage Bordeaux.



  20. Julie
    March 20th, 2007 at 3:12 pm · Link

    “I can make a woman come using just my mouth.”

    George Beringer squinted through an alcoholic haze at his friend Damian Hunt, Viscount Atherton, trying to figure out exactly what Damian meant by that remark. They were both much too drunk, but then, what else was there to do on a cold winter’s night tucked away here at the Atherton estate, except discuss horses and politics, and now, obviously, sex?

    “What’s so impressive about that “” I’ve never met a woman yet who could resist a man’s mouth on her private lips,” George declared.

    “Oh, but I’m not talking about using my mouth on her,” Damian said with a slow smile, “I’m talking about making her come using just the power of my words.”

    “Balderdash,” George cried, nearly dropping his wineglass, “you may have a well-deserved reputation as a ladies’ man, you scoundrel, but it’s impossible to make a woman climax using just words.”

    “Care to place a small wager on that?” Damian challenged, quirking an eyebrow.

    Next to sex, gambling was George’s favorite activity “” the night had suddenly gotten much more interesting.

    “I’ll place a large wager on it, you arrogant bastard “” my London townhouse says you can’t do it!”

    “Hmm…I’ve always admired your house in town,” Damian mused, holding up his wineglass in a salute of approval.



  21. Julie
    March 20th, 2007 at 3:13 pm · Link

    Wow, Karin, I am thrilled to still be part of this contest. You have a wonderful, supportive online community of writers here. I am learning so much from this experience!

    Thanks,
    Julie



  22. Elisabeth
    March 20th, 2007 at 5:02 pm · Link

    She’d become nothing more than a common thief.

    No, not common – nothing about Egyptologist Katherine Meyer could ever be construed as common, especially when she was legally dead.

    Kat checked her reflection in the bathroom mirror one last time, took a deep breath to settle the nerves in her stomach and told herself she looked pretty good for a seven-year-old corpse. The black slacks and matching jacket were perfect, nothing fancy, not one thing about them the slightest bit memorable. No one glancing her direction tonight would ever see anything other than the professional assistant she resembled, and that was precisely the way she wanted it. The less attention she drew, the safer she’d be, because being here wasn’t a choice, it was a matter of life and death.

    Her stomach rolled as she turned down the long hallway, as her sensible flats clicked along the cement floor. Muffled music from the party out front drifted to her ears; ahead, a security guard looked up from his post at the end of the corridor and gave her the once-over.

    She smiled what she hoped was a confident grin as she approached and flashed the ID badge she’d lifted from a Worthington’s employee only days before. The picture had been digitally altered to match her current disguise ““ dark brown, bob-style wig, blue color contacts, tortoise shell glasses – and as long as the man in front of her didn’t look too closely, she was home free.



  23. Sharon
    March 21st, 2007 at 8:08 am · Link

    Like a snake, coiled and ready to strike, it’d been waiting for him when he’d arrived at work. And as it had when he’d first read it, his stomach knotted and cold fear wrapped around him.

    He’d stared at the words, reading them but not processing them.

    No, that was a damn lie”“he’d processed them all right, and what his mind told him was inconceivable.

    The paper in his hand crinkled and he turned his gaze to it, smoothing the wrinkles out against his thigh and scanning it again even though he’d memorized it days ago.

    *Dear Mr. MacMillan*”“not Dear Mac or even Mac, hell, it should have said, Dear John because that’s exactly what it was”“a Dear John letter.

    Mac closed his eyes, the barrier of numbness that had first descended long gone, leaving enough room for the fear and loneliness and grief to sneak in.

    She’d left him.

    Up and walked out with nothing but a formal letter thanking him for her career and nothing else.

    As the plane started to slowly descend, Mac’s fear and grief began to give way to anger–anger he could deal with, anger he understood.



  24. Mary Ann Chulick
    March 21st, 2007 at 6:35 am · Link

    Joshua shuddered as the massive red door creaked open, allowing the stench of brimstone to steal into the room. Soon he would have to pass through that horrifying door”“unless he could come up with some way to evade his fate.

    He strode over to the Waiting Room clerk, a fat man whose inadequate wings fluttered anxiously as Joshua banged his fist on the desk. “Pray tell me, am I destined to go through that infernal door, or is there a path to redemption?”

    “Geez, Doc, it’s kinda late to be thinking about redeeming yourself.” Eyeing him curiously, the clerk added, “Usually you gotta commit one of the three biggies to get the red-door treatment”“rape, murder, or egregious pollution of natural resources”“so what’d you do?”

    “‘Twas closest to murder,” Joshua said, shame and regret searing him as he considered his wasted life, his great failure, his final disgrace. And yet he’d signed up as a surgeon in the Continental Army with the sole intention of helping his fellow man””including his courageous but reckless younger brother.

    “I’m still waitin’ on your orders, but I’ll send up Form A105″”Request for Redemption,” the clerk said. “Find somethin’ to do””I’ll sing out your name when I need you again.”



  25. Patricia Detta
    March 21st, 2007 at 8:33 pm · Link

    Through the darkness the child ran, dogging the woman’s heels. Short, angular legs that had never seen an ounce of baby fat, churned through the sweating foliage. The damp heat tightened, stealing her breath as the tropical jungle closed around her.

    “Mama,” the child whispered and the faint sound of her own voice was comforting when everything around her breathed death.

    She reached for the hand her mother offered, holding with desperate strength to the only person who might save her from the evil lurking in the shrouded Cambodian night.

    A monkey screeched, twigs snapped and only her mother’s grip kept her from bolting off the path as what sounded like footsteps ranged through the jungle.

    “It is not the Khmer Rouge, little one,” her mother soothed in careful French, the language their captors didn’t understand.

    The child bit her lip, the sharp pain making her forget the ache in her side but not what roamed in the dark shadows. She fought the fear, squeezing her mother’s hand, knowing that it would take both their strength to survive, just like it always had.

    But the night was long, the fear unrelenting and the child could only endure so much, she stumbled.



  26. Faith V. Smith
    March 21st, 2007 at 10:25 pm · Link

    Good luck to everyone. I got cut a few weeks back and meant to get back here before tonight to tell everyone good luck.

    Karin, you were awesome and I thank you for the wonderful opportunity.



  27. Diane Della Maggiora
    March 21st, 2007 at 10:35 pm · Link

    “Son, you’ve got more metal in you than the Terminator.”

    Immobile in a hospital bed with one leg in traction, one arm fractured, and bruises painted on his body like modern art on a canvas, Garrett McCloud found no humor in his doctor’s joke.

    Refraining from comment, he watched Dr. Shaw flip open the chart and wrinkle his lips while he studied whatever mysterious gibberish doctors wrote on the things. With his frizzy white hair, the good doctor remarkably resembled Einstein, and Garrett considered him as much a genius as the great scientist, in spite of the quirky, misplaced wit.

    Looking up, Dr. Shaw examined Garrett’s face and must have realized his joke flopped because he said, “Here’s the deal, Mr. McCloud, if you keep crashing, I don’t know if we can keep putting you together–even now, I can’t guarantee you’re not going to have a limp.”

    When he added, “Your knee resembled Humpty Dumpty after his great fall,” Garrett decided the doctor spent too much time with his grandkids.

    “I’m positive I’m paying a fortune for you and all the king’s men to patch me together again,” he growled.

    “You are,” the doctor agreed, scribbling notes on the chart before zeroing his gaze on Garrett and saying, “But my point is, racing motorcycles is a young man’s sport–it’s time for you to think about another career. Take my advice,” Dr. Shaw continued, tucking the chart back into place at the foot of the bed, “Blink those baby blues of yours at some beautiful woman, get married, have a family. Put your reckless ways on a shelf with all your trophies.”



  28. Diane Della Maggiora
    March 21st, 2007 at 10:37 pm · Link

    Good luck, everyone!



  29. Rachel
    March 21st, 2007 at 11:55 pm · Link

    Lord, that man was gorgeous.

    Of course, that was why I was standing in his office on a cold, wet Tuesday morning, dressed only in a form-fitting ruby red dress and matching strappy heels.

    I was a little cold, but not enough to make me rethink my wardrobe choice ““ long legs and perky feet were my only real assets, so I had no choice but to show them. It wasn’t as if I could rely on my *breasts* to carry the outfit ““ nope, left to their own devices, they’d let the team down every time. So I’d worn a push-up bra to maximise their potential and tried to draw attention in a downward, more beneficial direction.

    But this man in front of me – I doubted he had a single body part that wasn’t pulling its weight. I sighed in appreciation and allowed myself a moment to stare at the perfection of form that was Matt Malone.

    Then, heavenly moment over, I dragged my focus from Mr Sexalicious back to my whole reason for being there. The Plan.

    He turned as his receptionist introduced me, betraying a slight hesitation as he took in my dress – and hopefully my feet – but he covered it well and held out his hand.



  30. Rachel
    March 22nd, 2007 at 12:08 am · Link

    Good luck everyone!

    I get sad each week when stories I like get cut because I’m dying to know what happens next – hopefully my favorites all get published so I can buy them :).

    Thanks, Karin and judges!
    Rachel



  31. Dulcie Sorenson
    March 23rd, 2007 at 4:23 am · Link

    “Just keep on driving, Mister,” Moxie said as she struggled to keep the gun in her hand from shaking as she aimed it at the man’s head.

    He turned to look down the barrel of the gun, his eyes then trailing up her arm to look into her face. She tried to put on a hard, outlawish-looking expression, but it wasn’t working””it’s hard to look evil when you’ve got curly red hair and freckles.

    “You’re joking, right?” He gave her a hopeful little smile, while his eye cut over to the gun pointed at his chin.

    “Nope, dead serious. Drive on out of here and nobody gets hurt.” She gestured with the gun toward the driveway leading out of the sun baked hotel parking lot.

    “Great,” he mumbled, “I’m being abducted by a pixie.”

    This fella wasn’t the first one to compare her to some kind of fairyland creature, Moxie realized with a sigh.



  32. LaDonna
    March 23rd, 2007 at 12:45 pm · Link

    Who said dying was easy?

    Ruby May stepped out the front door of the Delta Funeral Home in what had been her good luck dress–until they buried her in it. She studied her reflection in passing, and realized dying in Delta had a downside; she was a Blue Light Special on heels.

    The town slowly receded as Ruby walked the winding Tennessee roads, reliving life moments all strung together like glass beads. Life didn’t come with a damn rulebook–a good thing since ignoring advice had been her personal mantra. She had led an amoral life, impossible to sugarcoat, and there was a high probability her view would be outside those pearly gates her mama talked about.

    In the distance, the old homestead sprawled across Cooper Mountain and Ruby ran to it, like a child bolting into a mama’s arms. The heart of the place welcomed her, surprising since she had high-tailed it out of town at the first bump in the road. Leaving a daughter for Syble to raise had shocked the good people of Delta, like every other shenanigan she’d pulled all in the name of Ruby.

    She settled on the old porch swing ready to face the music, and see what wounded she’d left behind–Ruby expected a few frayed edges–but the panoramic glimpse just about killed her…again.



  33. Anne
    March 23rd, 2007 at 3:50 pm · Link

    As much as he’d hoped Lacey McLaren had gained a hundred pounds and sprouted horns in the five years since he’d last seen her, she hadn’t. Noah cursed, unable to pull his gaze away; if anything, she was more beautiful now than when they’d first met. His heart tripped over itself, his gut twisting into knots as he watched her lead the chestnut mare into the middle of the indoor arena and mount up.
    Thank God it was too damn hot for chaps today; the image of her ass framed in tight suede was one he really didn’t need to carry with him. Just the thought sent blood rushing south, causing his jeans to grow tighter around the zipper.
    “Does Lacey have a clue that it’s me, specifically, who’s come to look at buying her horses?” he asked, casting his half-brother a sidelong glance.

    Colin’s sly grin was all the answer he needed.

    “She’s expecting my brother,” he explained calmly, not taking his eyes off the horse and rider,”she just doesn’t know that you’re him.”

    “Seeing her reaction might just be worth the jetlag,” Noah said, unable to keep the bitterness from his tone.

    During the long flight from Phoenix to Toronto, all the feelings he’d worked so hard to keep buried after she walked out on him slowly began to resurface.



  34. Mary Marvella
    March 23rd, 2007 at 4:06 pm · Link

    “Maybe I should become a lesbian for a week,” I blurted.

    Carol choked on what was left of her watered down frozen strawberry daiquiri.

    I intended to pat her back, but she had become a blur ““ three too many daiquiris for me ““ so even the beige walls of my den seemed to move.

    Where the hell did that come from?” Carol asked, staring at me as if I’d grown two heads.

    I gulped the rest of my drink and said in a voice I knew sounded like a whine, “Don’t know what else to do.”

    “Spill, right now, Margo,” Carol ordered as she banged her glass on the magazine-covered, white coffee table.

    I hiccuped, then answered, “Jay’s coming back to town.”

    I scratched my head, but could barely feel it.

    Carol’s eyes didn’t look so clear when she asked, “And you want to become a lesbian why?”

    “I’m too old to have another baby,” I answered, struggling to untangle my legs and get off the damned couch, which wouldn’t let me up.



  35. LaDonna
    March 23rd, 2007 at 4:34 pm · Link

    Karin, I came up with a word change. First time I’ve had to post twice, but here goes the corrected version. lol



  36. LaDonna
    March 23rd, 2007 at 5:01 pm · Link

    Who said dying was easy?

    Ruby May stepped out the front door of the Delta Funeral Home in what had been her good luck dress–until they buried her in it. She studied her reflection in passing, and realized dying in Delta had a downside; she was a Blue Light Special on heels.

    The town slowly receded as Ruby walked the winding Tennessee roads, reliving life moments all strung together like glass beads. Life didn’t come with a damn rulebook–a good thing since ignoring advice had been her personal mantra. She had led an amoral life, impossible to sugarcoat, and there was a high probability her view would be outside those pearly gates her mama talked about.

    In the distance, the old homestead sprawled across Cooper Mountain and Ruby ran to it, like a child bolting into a mama’s arms. The heart of the place welcomed her, surprising since she had high-tailed it out of town at the first bump in the road. Leaving a daughter for Syble to raise had shocked the good people of Delta, like every other shenanigan she’d pulled all in the name of Ruby.

    She settled on the old porch swing ready to face the music and count the wounded she’d left behind–Ruby expected a few frayed edges–but the panoramic glimpse about killed her…again.



  37. Linda
    March 23rd, 2007 at 5:51 pm · Link

    “Your sorry ass is going to be even sorrier, Jimmy Ray!”

    The bat connected with a sickening, satisfying crunch. Jimmy Ray’s pained, horrified expression should have sent a spurt of triumph through Angel, but it didn’t.

    “You crazy bitch!”

    She tightened her grip on the scarred Louisville Slugger. She had a choice ““ take another swing at her ex’s ego by hitting him where it would hurt him most or walk away before the cops showed up and she lost what little hard-won dignity she had left.

    Too late.

    Blue lights flaring in lazy swirls, a Chandler County sheriff’s car pulled into the parking lot. If God were listening to her this one time, Cookie would not be in that car. But, as the Big Guy obviously had a habit of turning His hearing aid off where she was concerned . . . well, she’d bet her ass Cookie was behind the wheel.



  38. Linda
    March 23rd, 2007 at 5:55 pm · Link

    Sigh. Karin, I posted the wrong draft. Here’s the correct one:

    “Your sorry ass is going to be even sorrier, Jimmy Ray!”

    The bat connected with a sickening, satisfying crunch. Jimmy Ray’s pained, horrified expression should have sent a spurt of triumph through Angel, but it didn’t.

    “You crazy bitch!”

    She tightened her grip on the scarred Louisville Slugger. She had a choice ““ take another swing at her ex’s ego by hitting him where it would hurt him most or walk away before the cops showed up and she lost what little hard-won dignity she had left.

    Too late.

    Blue lights flaring in lazy swirls, a Chandler County sheriff’s car pulled into the parking lot. If God were listening to her this one time, Cookie would not be in that car. But, as the Big Guy had a habit of turning His hearing aid off where she was concerned . . . why would this time be any different?



  39. Theresa
    March 23rd, 2007 at 8:57 pm · Link

    “Despite what you apparently believe,” Lieutenant Kathryn Glace snapped, the pale skin across her cheeks tightening and tinting peach, “I’ve given this a great deal of thought””the family is legitimate, and their unique. . .talents. . have proven significantly helpful in the past.”

    “I know who they are,” Nick said, trying to iron the grit from his voice. He knew what they were too: gypsies, tramps and thieves. Okay, maybe not tramps, but the thievery bit sure as hell fit. The con artist he’d been stuck with on the Riverside kidnapping, had charged the family a bundle for her so called services, only to deliver false hope and additional heartache. Significantly helpful? Hardly.

    “This isn’t a request, detective,” the lieutenant said, her blue eyes chilling, “you have no leads, no evidence and no suspects. What you do have, is a maniac terrorizing the cat lovers of Seattle. Since traditional methods appear to be failing us, perhaps its time to take a more unorthodox approach.”



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